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I'm Not Okay Chapter Five (Commentary)I'm Not OkayChapter Fivea/n: TARA IS DA BIGGEST FUCKING BITCH EVER (Yep) AND BY THE WAY I'M A BIGGER MCR FAN AND GERARD IS MINE 4EVA (Actually, he's married to that chick from Mindless Self Indulgence) SO FUCK U! AND I'M NOT GIVING U UR SWEATER BACK!Eternity was so happy (Well that's a surprise) She went to class with the other fifth-years, Sea, Draco, Shadow, Darren and Satan. That fucking retard Elvira (whose real name was Lindsay like that fucking ho Lindsay Loan) (What's wrong with the name Lindsay?) had gone all the way back to first-year and they put her in Gryffindor where all the retarded preps were (I bet they're smarter than you) because she couldn't even write properly and she had to get her friends 2 do it for her. (Some people can't help that. I have a friend who has trouble with spelling and grammar and I'm happy to help her)Anyway, Eternity woke up from her dar
I'm Not Okay Chapter Four (Commentary)I'm Not OkayChapter FourBring Me To LifeEternity woke up the next morning. (Oh, so she didn't die?) She brushed her teeth, combed her hair, and then went to her closet. She put on a long black dress that was all ripped and torn, with pink stuff underneath (kind of like the one Amy Lee wore to the Grammies) and then put on big black combat boots. (NO ONE CARES.)Shadow, Elvira and Sea all got up"You are so lucky, bitch." (Why?) moaned Shadow while she put on her own clothes (a long black dress with a corset at the top, pointy high-heeled boots, and fishnets) (Do we really need to know all this?)"You have such a great body" added Sea, putting on a ripped black dress with no sleeves that looked exactly like the one the lead singer of her favorite goth band had worn to the MTV Awards that year. (Elvira put on a long black velvet dress with crimson lace.) (WE DON'T NEED TO KNOW THIS.)Eternity la
I'm Not Okay Chapter Three (Commentary)I'm Not OkayChapter ThreeDualitya/n: look, I don't care when the f Harry Potter is in my version it takes place now. BTW, please come up with some goth books and movies. (There's something called Google. Use it.) If u notice I used some of the gothic bands! PS: NO PREPS.After dinner Eternity had to get back into a line with the first-years (she was part of them but much older) and Draco and another girl lead them upstairs into the Slytherin dorm. (a/n: in this story Draco and Pansy r cousins.) Eternity got to go to the front of the line to talk to Draco. She plunged her booted feet onto the stone floor and did so until she was at the front of the line. The other girl talking to Draco was had long ebony locks with blue streaks in them. She wore lots of white foundation and black eyeliner. She looked just like the girl in Linkin Park's video for Crawling. (Linkin Park suck ass) (a/n: Eternity looks more like Amy Lee) (No.)"What's y
I'm Not Okay Chapter Two (Commentary)I'm Not OkayChapter TwoThe Beautiful People (Because it's so creative to name chapters after song titles)a/n: if ur a prep, DON'T READ THIS STORY (Well, I'm a rock chick with blue hair from England, how do you do chap?). If you're not please help me out by suggesting some goth bands and movies for me to reference. Thanx.After the train ride Eternity and the other students got off the train (No shit.) Eternity was shocked. In front of her was a beautiful castle (You're right there) A very tall bearded man asked them to follow him into little boats. (Hell yeah, Hagrid and his little boats bitches) Draco waved good-bye to Eternity and made death's touch sign. (What?) (a/n: if u don't know what that is I suggest u fuck off to a Britney Spears concert or something). (Nahhhhh ) Eternity and the others trooped inside the big castle. (Oh, they trooped in
I'm Not Okay Chapter One (Commentary) Hey everyone, Electricka-Sixx here.So I decided, since I'm a complete saddo with nothing better to do in my spare time, that I'm going to make commentary on Tara's little friend Raven's Harry Potter fan fic, "I'm Not Okay" I was going to do commentary on the infamous "My Immortal", but I would probably get bored and a lot of people are doing that already.Anyway, enjoyI'm Not OkayChapter One: Helenaa/n: okay I don't own this but whatever.Fifteen-year-old Eternity Demen'tia Johnson (Dementia Johnson?) warily took a seat on the Hogwarts Express. As she did so, she heard many giggles in the air. Ugh. Stupid preps (So you're a Prep just for simply laughing? Hell, I love laughing, so I must be the biggest Prep evaaarrr) Eternity had hoped she wouldn't see any when she came to Hogwarts. They had made her life in Los Angeles High School miserable. Now she was supposed to put up with them here? (Get over it. Everyone ha